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| | Skinny Nerd Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 41
| A poem. :
06-17-2007
I came up with without pausing from typing:
The ashes fall,
Tainting the ground,
Darkness all around.
The stagnant smell fills my nostrils,
Intrigues my senses,
Raises my defenses.
The sound of gunfire in the distance,
Loud flashes, startling me from my peacefulness,
The sooner this all ends the sooner I can rest.
You have a go
Just write and don't stop and see what you can come up with.
If you pause to think you are cheating  . |
| | | Beats up Foreign Ex Students Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Remembering...
Posts: 2,101
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06-17-2007
Yeah I suck at poetry off the top of my head. We are debating making a poetry club sticky  LOL
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Originally Posted by Nastadon 28) wtf is a coat hanger? | |
| | | Skinny Nerd Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 41
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06-17-2007
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Originally Posted by Git Yeah I suck at poetry off the top of my head. We are debating making a poetry club sticky  LOL | Try it right now.
The git lays silently, tenderly
Stroking his arm.
Wondering what went wrong.
The mistakes of his past haunt his nightmares,
Remove any possibility of sleep.
See!
Come up with some random bullshit with me. |
| | | Beats up Foreign Ex Students Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Remembering...
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06-17-2007
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Originally Posted by CoNNN Try it right now.
The git lays silently, tenderly
Stroking his arm.
Wondering what went wrong. The mistakes of his past haunt his nightmares,
Remove any possibility of sleep.
See!
Come up with some random bullshit with me. | That made me LOL.
.........
CoN is amazing,
I'm not even going to try,
To come up with words that rhyme.
Sorry  I need a lot of time to come up with a good poem.
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Originally Posted by Nastadon 28) wtf is a coat hanger? | |
| | | Skinny Nerd Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 41
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06-17-2007
Quote:
Originally Posted by Git .........
CoN is amazing,
I'm not even going to try,
To come up with words that rhyme.
Sorry  I need a lot of time to come up with a good poem. | Poetry doesn't have to rhyme!
Just let it flow and it usually sounds ok. |
| | | Never has a pen Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Wisconsin
Posts: 1,344
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06-19-2007
Like a phoenix rising from the ashes
Or the silent light, that loudly flashes
screaming in the distances
cries of a thousands years
pleading in this instance
the shedding of a million tears
poetry off top of head ftw
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Thanks Shmads! |
| | | Skinny Nerd Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: St. Louis
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06-20-2007
Con, you're so dark man. Lighten up!
__________________ Let's keep this professional. |
| | | Freshman Bully Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: ha.
Posts: 1,086
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06-20-2007
Lol. Man. Let me get some from the h2f poetry thread. I had some good shit =] If I had to live life by one beat,
I'm sure your heart would suffice.
Let's take our chances,
Let's roll these dice.
With all odds against us,
We will prevail.
If we just run away from all of this,
Let go of everything but eachother.
Let's lie here and forget the world.
Let's fall asleep to the beat of our hearts as one. Forever.
No longer a word coming from my lips,
Forever is a feeling.
Forever is a river flowing from my heart,
Love.
No longer a statement thrown around as pleased,
Love is something precious,
Love is the feeling being shouted by my soul.
Life.
No longer something wasted, torn apart, and thrown away,
Life is the true gift of this beautiful Earth,
Life is being poured into every ounce of our beings.
You are my heartbeat,
You are my every breath.
You are the blood flowing through my viens.
Every bit of happiness I could ever ask for,
Brought by you on a silver platter.
My heart is singing you a song,
Every note is perfect, and feuled by you.
Have you come to realization yet?
The realization that you are everything to me.
Our love is a never ending fire,
So rest your head on my shoulder, girl.
Because forever is a long time.
You and me,
We are on top of the world.
Just name one thing that can stop us,
And I'll assure you you are wrong.
So let's hold on to these memories we've made,
And make some new ones while we're at it.
'Cause we've got an eternity at our feet.
Heh. I'll post some later when I'm on the computer that actually has some saved on it.
EDIT* Those are four different poems, not one with four stanzas =P
Last edited by Qu4dra; 06-20-2007 at 02:18 PM.
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| | | Beats up Foreign Ex Students Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Remembering...
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06-20-2007
Quote:
Originally Posted by Qu4dra Lol. Man. Let me get some from the h2f poetry thread. I had some good shit =] If I had to live life by one beat,
I'm sure your heart would suffice.
Let's take our chances,
Let's roll these dice.
With all odds against us,
We will prevail.
If we just run away from all of this,
Let go of everything but eachother.
Let's lie here and forget the world.
Let's fall asleep to the beat of our hearts as one. | That's not bad at all. 
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Originally Posted by Nastadon 28) wtf is a coat hanger? | |
| | | Sleeps in Class Join Date: Jun 2007 Location: Zoo Town, Montana
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06-20-2007
I would try, but i try and put alot of thought into my Poetry.
Yours are good, but mine demand my thoughts.
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Originally Posted by Git I thought Tigga would say "I waved at a girl once" | Quote:
Originally Posted by Git Tigga > Me.
Nuff said. | |
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