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In my opinion Fight Club was an amazing book, the plot was really good and it always had the perfect twist at the perfect time. The book describes the Characters in an original, but you can also visualize the character very easily in your head. There were only a few thing that did not work out like the ending “Chuck Palahniuk(Page 208) because every once in a while, somebody brings me my lunch tray and my meds and he has a black eye or his forehead is swollen with stitches ,and he says “We miss you Mr. Durden.” Which totally leaves it open and can be very confusing. Also at every new chapter it can be confusing because it seems to make a new point every time or almost a new story. It is like the whole story was written by two or three different authors and put the story together almost like a puzzle. One more thing is that the main character and the person who is his sidekick is the same person which you don’t learn from the beginning. The setting plays a very important rile in this novel. The descriptions of the setting puts a very distinct picture in your head, almost making you fell you are side-by-side with Tyler Durden in project mayhem. All around I thought it was an amazing book and I would love to read a second one if it would come out.

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Way to steal my exact sentence I gave you

Uncapitalize Characters, and re-word that sentence it makes no sense. Where it says "visualize the character..." add an S to the end of character.

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"The book describes the Character in an original, but you can also..."

Character does not need to be capitalized. And you seemed to have left out the part after "in an original". The best way to proof read is to print out your work and read it allowed. You will catch a lot of the usage and punctuation errors and those silly mistakes like that.


edit: for future stuff, you used the wrong "DO" in your title. Due and Do are commonly confused homonyms.

To "Do" something.
The paper is "Due" on Friday.

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